Questions for Gail Jones on the novel Dreams of Speaking by Ayano Fukuda, Aki Irimajiri, Asuka Kimura, Tadayuki Kin, Hiroyuki Koreeda, Joyce Jie Xuan Lim, Yusuke Matsumura, Chihiro Seko, Yuichiro Tanakamaru, Reiei Tei, Junichi Tran, Yasuhiro Wakai, Erika Yamauchi
Tokyo University 28/06/06
Can you explain the title Dreams of Speaking? [We have one theory that Mr Sakamoto is too elegant, tolerant, and even omnipotent (for example the episode of the waiters). He can be seen as a symbol of perfection (especially on how to live with technology) and exists to offer Alice a kind of salvation. His sudden death can be interpreted as the end of a reverie, a dream. Whatever the imaginary Mr Sakamoto communicates therefore represents the ‘dreams of speaking’ of the title. How do you feel about readers interpreting your work in this extreme kind of way?]
What a wonderful theory! I think that texts finally belong to readers and I’m delighted at such an ingenious and interesting reading of the text. According to Maurice Blanchot, the French philosopher, the text doesn’t come into being until it is read and that there is a kind of collaboration in meaning-making. I don’t think of Mr Sakamoto as having a dream status, but he does offer Alice salvation because of the force of his humanity. The novel was originally called The Voices, but I had to find a new title when another novel was published with that title just before mine. So the original idea was to meditate on the status of the voice in relation to friendship and technology – what people say and don’t say to each other, what families, friends, lovers say and don’t say. But I prefer the title Dreams of Speaking and for me the ‘dream’ is in part the aspiration to a kind of open and honest conversation.
A critic in the London Times has said that Dreams of Speaking is no page-turner. But in fact the scattered nature of the episodes and biographical stories encourages the reader to turn the page to discover what you the author have in mind. Was narrative tension a consideration in how you structured the many episodes in this novel? If not, what determined the order?
I wanted lots of mini-narratives so there was a sense of the many lives and stories that contribute to our own. I’m, not really interested in the linear plot and the idea that there is a classic arc of building up tension and then resolving it. I’m more interested in a structure that gives a particular “texture’ to reading, so that there are intellectual and emotional tensions operating at many levels in the text. The order of episodes was rather random; I wanted some things at the beginning of the friendship the cinema, the telephone, the forms that connect Alice and Mr Sakamoto – and I wanted more complex (even more painful) kinds of technology – like the MRI imaging machine – to come at the end. But I had no fixed sequence and tried to find my way intuitively.
Alice makes an impulsive decision to visit Mr Sakamoto in Nagasaki. She lives in Paris for a long time off an unfinished writing project. Alice and Mr Sakamoto strike up an immediate rapport in a train. What role does authenticity have to play in this novel?
I’m not really sure what ‘authenticity’ means. I do think there are forms of honest and intimacy that I wanted the pair to discover, and most of this is achieved in conversation (actual or in email). Alice is not really sure who she is, but Mr Sakamoto has a very firm sense of self, achieved over his lifetime and by contact with suffering an a catastrophic scale. So I do privilege him in the relationship as the wise one.
Mr Sakamoto’s ‘scientific’ messages are primarily biographical rather than centring on discoveries or inventions. The sense they give is that no matter how far technology develops, it will never overcome man’s sense of doom and his emotions. Does the biographical emphasis suggest that the human mind and heart will always be superior to modern technology?
Yes, I suppose so. Mr Sakamoto is interested in the life behind the invention, and the fact that there are hidden narratives to every object we use. He is a kind of radical humanist; he no longer believes in god, but he does believe in beauty, community and the power of love.
Most of Dreams of Speaking is about Alice, but it is not written in the first person. Did you ever consider writing the novel in the first person, as a way of allowing more immediate access to Alice’s emotions?
I wanted Alice to be a little remote. I can’t imagine writing an entire novel in the first person (but who knows? Maybe I will some day.) It may be a problem for readers that Alice begins so detached; she is the one who has to learn that the head and the heart are not separated (I’ve never believed in this cruel and banal division).
There are many pauses in Dreams of Speaking. It seems sometimes like a haiku, and you refer to haiku several times in the novel. Is there a deliberate resonance between your style of writing and the style of haiku?
I’m very pleased with this question. I do have an interest in haiku, and also love Sei Shonagon’s Pillowbook. What interests me here are small illuminated insights we have that are very fleeting but very precious, moments in which we sense the mystery of things, and their beauty. There is a book by Elaine Scarry called On Beauty and Being Just and she says that when we come across a beautiful thing – an orange-mauve moth on a brick, or a perfect sentence – it is like a tear in the fabric of the world that pulls us through to a vaster space. I’m very interested in the poetics of concision and in the honouring of small special moments.
‘With carefully chosen images and words, the reader is transported across the tyranny of time to face a century of terror and awe.’ This sentence comes from a review of Dreams of Speaking in Time Pacific magazine and it sums up your book beautifully. However, your carefully chosen words are at times long and difficult to understand, especially for non-native speakers, often requiring a dictionary. The unusual academic vocabulary can give the impression that you’re writing for a specific group of readers, but not everyone - the reader can sometimes feel excluded. How much do you think ahead toward the concerns of potential readers, or do you accept that the readership for a novel like Dreams of Speaking is limited?
I hope I’m not excluding any readers, but I understand your question. I’m concerned not with an ideal of transparency in language, but in drawing attention to language and complicating the texture of the prose. As a reader I always love discovering a new words in a novel, so I’m hoping this is part of a form of discovery and pleasure – not exclusion – for any readers willing to take the ride.
The story of Mr Sakamoto’s early life, and his home in Nagasaki, provide a useful means of including a discussion about the atomic bomb. However, he seems slightly unreal, to be pushed around in the service of the novel. Is he modelled on any real Japanese person?
Oh dear: I hope Mr Sakamoto isn’t “pushed around at the service of the novel” because he is truly the centre of value and I want readers to feel a kind of grief when he dies. He is not modelled on anyone in particular, but I hope the character pays respect to a certain type of Japanese masculinity – one who has learned to cross cultures, who has developed a deep understanding of human struggles and experiences. Last week I gave a lecture on Murakami Haruki, The Wild Sheep Chase, and the ‘boku’ of Murakami is the opposite to Mr Sakamoto. He is not the post-modern subject who is drifting and lost and on a strange quest, but someone grounded in the dense and painful history of his own place and respectful of the complexity of Alice and Uncle Tadeo.
To what extent do you, as the author, recognise Alice’s own responsibility for her solitude? Her aloneness creates the melancholy mood of the book, but although she herself seems unaware of this, her loneliness can often be seen as self-inflicted. She chooses to stay in a small hotel room and has a meal alone rather than going out. Also, when talking to Norah, she hides specific facts about Mr Sakamoto. If she has no intention of opening up to others, then it’s not so surprising they keep their distance. Do you think Alice Black is guilty of self-pity, of being her own worst enemy?
Alice Black has a lot to learn. She probably is responsible for her own solitude, which is why Mr Sakamoto’s spontaneous gift of friendship surprises and delights her. I didn’t want an all-knowing heroine, but someone very flawed. The tensions between her intellectual world and the life of the body (her windsurfing, her wound when she windsurfs at the end of the text) are meant to suggest what she has not resolved. It is only in losing the beloved body of Mr Sakamoto that she begins to understand her own lack of humanity. Or rather, what she cannot speak. In the end she must speak about Mr Sakamoto.
At the end of the book, the scene where Alice talks to the answer-phone is great. However, the adoption scene that precedes it seems to raise some problems. Loneliness, isolation and a sense of lost identity are ubiquitous in the modern world, a theme the novel explores. However, Alice’s loneliness is ultimately attributed to the secret of her birth, and this revelation excludes readers from sharing Alice’s feelings of alienation (as they have done previously). Adoption gives a persuasive, rational explanation to her sense of isolation. Why did you choose to add this explanation at the end of the novel?
Yes, you’re right. If I had another chance to edit the book I would take out the adoption. I realized only after Dreams of Speaking was published that the adoption would be read as an “explanation” for Alice’s character and I really wanted to make her more subtle than that. You’re such a clever group of readers to make this comment, and absolutely right that it over-rationalizes her loneliness.
Is the death of Mr Sakamoto the beginning of Alice’s recovery, of her reconciliation to ‘nuance and eternity’? Or is it a new source of suffering to add to Alice’s deep loneliness as described since the beginning of the book? If so, is there any positive message at the end of the book – where can Alice expect to find help? Do you have any opinion about happy endings?
I hope that the last sentence, that implies that Alice will now tell the story of her friendship, implies that speaking will allow her to move from grief to wisdom. So although the novel is framed by grief, it also shows the reconciliation of the sisters and insists on forms of recovery through story. The speech-act with the answer phone, when Alice speaks truly of her feelings – is, I hope, the beginning of recovery. I’m not sure that all stories can have happy endings: this one is certainly mixed, since it is only through loss that Alice achieves growth. There will be a transformation, but she will always be shaped by loss.
I want to conclude by thanking you for such clever, sensitive and compelling questions. It is an honour to have such a brilliant group of readers. These sort of questions help me as a writer to become more circumspect about my process. I do hope Dreams gave you some pleasure – or at least some food for thought!
Questions for A.L.Kennedy on the novel Paradise by Liu Mei Cheng, Yuko Miyawaka, Keiko Nagano, Tomoko Takeda, Satoki Umezawa, Ayaka Wada, Yasuhiro Wakai
Tokyo University 30/01/06
Would a Scottish reader understand the meaning of ‘Mo run geal og’ (my fair young love)? Do you include it here because the song is dedicated as a funeral song? Or because this song has political or any other specific relevance to the reading of Paradise? These words are offered as part of the book – how are they significant?
Not too many readers would understand it – but the Gaels would. And it’s a very well-known song, so easy to find, should they wish to make the effort. It’s not something without which you wouldn’t understand the book. It began as a dedication on “Everything You Need” and there is a translation of part of the song in the book – it’s a lament for a dead love, not just any dead person and that was important there. It then also seemed to suit “Indelible Acts”. I used it again for this book because she begins to associate paleness, these fugitive flashes of white, or of nakedness, or visions of a swan with her love, so it almost folded into the book because I knew it would be there.
When we looked up the 14 stations of the cross the book seemed unconnected in a systematic way with the 14 stations (though events could be forced to fit). Could you tell us more about this structure?
Yes, the book is based on that structure. I hope without forcing, but without it being too obvious. Again, I couldn’t assume that people would know the stations, so the book has to work without them. I like the inevitability of any martyrdom, the associations with wine and Christianity, the idea of the spiritual piercing something secular through extremity.
Why is Hannah a Catholic? Does the structure determine elements in the story, or do character and plot always come first?
I specifically say that she’s not a Catholic – if you refer to the carol service, she doesn’t know what’s going on. The structure has to be symapthetic to character and plot, if there’s a very set stucture, then it has to appear very early and be very sympathetic – which is what happened here.
There don’t seem to be many fictional characters who are dentists. Why is Robert a dentist? Could he have been a doctor or a lawyer?
I liked the idea of an alcoholic dentist – more scary in a way, more regularly met than a surgeon, or a pilot. Statistically, they also have very high levels of alcoholism.
Robert has a traumatic experience to motivate his drinking, but there seems no clear motive for Hannah. Why is that? If looking for a motive changes the way we read the book, is that a good thing?
I wanted her to have no “motive”. Alcoholism is a disease – you don’t need a motive for a disease – this isn’t Hollywood. In life, things happen without your knowing why, bewliderment is part of the picture – I’d rather go with life than Hollywood.
Who is the bartender in Chapter 12? He seems to know a lot, and appears to be a meaningful character. Yet he is introduced to the story very suddenly, and leaves us as puzzled as Hannah.
If you pay attention to his description, it corresponds to Hannah’s idea of God – much earlier in the book. If you don’t pay attention, I can’t really help it – although what he says does suggest who he is and he does give a clear reference to Matthew “Come to me all you who are heavy laden and I will give you rest.” He has been interpreted as Demonic, which may work as well for the readers who thought that. He appears at a point where Hannah is already mostly out of her mind, so you won’t get huge clarity, beyond the spiritual.
The man Hannah may or may not meet who gives her the train tickets is called Matt Duchamps. This suggests Marcel Duchamp, who played with false and real names when signing his famous sculpture of a urinal. Robert Gardener has a made-up name (and may be made up by Hannah). In fact, by the end of Paradise the reader is free to interpret the information in the train scenes in any way they want. Are you influenced or inspired by post-modern art and how do you feel about this type of close analysis as a way of reading your novels?
It may suggest Marcel Duchamp to you, that’s fine. I wasn’t go there. I was writing a book about an alcoholic – it’s not really going to be honest to let you get away with only her quite ofetn rosy view of what is an unpleasant reality. I also wanted to take you to a point where you might actually share her experience of a bad, florid blackout – which is why you don’t know what of the end is real. You also can’t know, because she doesn’t know and it’s a first person narrative. So it’s a psychological decision and decision driven by subject matter. Post-modern art gives me a pain. Close analysis is fine, but it will tend to get further and further from the book – it becomes a demonstration of how clever the reader can get – not quite about reading. All readers views of a book will be different, sometimes very different, but taking the trouble to write out all the possible things the writer may have been thinking tends to become absurd quite quckly – it misses the masic principle which would be that a writer constructing a book is building something the reader invests with significance, as they wish. The “close analysis” is just another investment of significance by an individual.
Hannah loses consciousness and gets acquainted with men in bars. Later she is shown as being loyal to Robert. In some ways, her salvation lies in a traditional idea of sexual faithfulness. Do you have a clear moral scale in mind when you’re writing?
I don’t know if her salvation could lie in deciding to be faithful to someone who’s probably incapable of being faithful to her. And she does manage to have sex with someone else as an expression of her faithfulness – which is hardy conventional. I have no moral scale – my characters make their own decisions. My own morality would govern whether I write something I feel is untrue, or whether I abuse the reader, or whether I steal from someone’s life – my relationship with my craft.
Do you think that novels can affect the real world, by influencing the way readers act? In the last chapter there is a suggestion of infinite repetition, and on the train Hannah loses her sense of identity. Is this because you wanted to communicate an opinion about alcoholism and where it leads? If this story could happen to anyone, is Paradise supposed to put people off drinking?
I don’t think you can write a book with any hope that it will have the effect you want, in that way. Readers have told me the book put them off drinking, readers have told me it made them want a drink. A few people told me it helped them understand individual people they knew who were alcoholics – I would even have hoped that one, but I was happy it had happened. Again, it’s more about them being ready to understand and having distance from whatever pain was associated with the area.
The mention of the war (in the airplane to Canada) seems abrupt, and also unnatural for Hannah, whose interest before this lies almost solely in drink and her love life. Why should the war make her desperate? Did you throw this bit in because you personally oppose the Iraq war? We also know from your website that you’ve started doing stand-up comedy. Do you think this filters into Paradise? Some of Hannah’s drunken riffs at the beginning of the book read like stand-up set-pieces. Is this intentional?
The mention of the war is abrupt – Hannah is a person capable of missing an entire war. She has no interest in it whatever. It doesn’t then make her any madder than any other news would have, she’s riding for a fall throughout that journey, but she’s not without feeling or intelligence, she knows that war is a bad thing – she just doesn’t have much space for people other than herself. It’s not in so I can say something about the war – I say things about the war all over the place. What she says is what she thinks – something negative taking her down into a black drunk. Paradise is certainly intended to be funny – it would be unbearable if it wasn’t lightened by something. But I’d have to say – because I do stand-up – that her riffs ain’t stand-up. That wouldn’t work on the page and she wouldn’t work on the stage. Different balance of content and delivery, different relationship with the recipient of the words.
You treat author profiles with contempt. Aren’t they interesting to readers in the same way as a fictional portrait is interesting (even if untrue)?
I object to people saying things are true when they’re not. If the profile was offered as fiction it would be interesting as fiction – it’s offered as fact. I also dislike laziness – most profiles are based an a hurried reading of other profiles. It’s bad, space-filling journalism – cheap, uninformative and a barrier between the reader and the book and a barrier between people who work in the arts and people who receive them and other artists. Why would I like any of that ? Good author profiles would be interesting – although you’d aonly really get one shot every ten years or so, people don’t usually change that fast. Good writing of any kind is interesting and informative and all kinds of things. I’m objecting to the lack of good writing in UK journalism.
I loved the writing so much I couldn’t come up with any ‘close reading’ questions for you the writer, only for myself and God. Is this the sign of a successful novel?
In my opinion it’s the sign of a successful reader. You’ve had an experience, it’s made you thoughtful, you’ll deal with that and on to the next experience – that’s nothing to do with me – that’s all the work you did as a reader – now you reward yourself and on we go. (But I think it’s not allowed if you’re studying English – saying “I liked it and now please leave me alone.” Doesn’t get you marks. Which is why I didn’t study English.)
From Pretext 11 2005
A Sermon
If you want your version of the world published, make every effort to get to know her, and you know who she is, because she used to sleep with him, and that bastard’s married to the sister off the commissioning editor. But don’t tell him he’s a bastard, obviously. Let him know he glows in the dark because word gets around, and you know what? It’s a small world.
Supposedly. This is one model of the literary life, as a self-serving hive of coteries and changeable alliances moving from one generation to the next, a network of exclusive intimacies. This must be highly reassuring if you’re in on it, of it, a node on the trembling web. This model does, however, miss out one essential factor of the literary experience. The actual production of literature.
The problem lies in the choice of metaphor. The buzzy, busy hive, the connecting web, the small world. None of these comparisons seem very helpful when now as always the most distinctive feature of a writer’s life is solitude. You are about to set out alone on the adventure of, say, a novel. Ambitious for the work you’re about to create, you have the idea that it should contain the world and everything in it, and at this point in the journey, only just out of your depth, the combination of solitude and ambition will make that world seem vast.
Hardly surprising, then, that it’s tempting to grasp for a lifeline, any offer of rescue to a smaller and safer place. One shrivelling possibility has it that only a small and select number of people can help. If you can find them, and ingratiate yourselves to the right names in the right order, then all will be well. It will not.
The smallness of the writer’s world is best measured in metric, and not in people. The real challenge of shrink-to-fit (remembering you’re still alone) is the process of putting everything you know and ever thought important onto blank sheets of paper. An A4 page measures 210 millimetres by 297 millimetres. For a shortish novel of about 200 typescript pages, the uncharted regions therefore cover an area 59.4 metres by 42. This is about two-thirds of a soccer pitch or the deck area of a small container ship. Small or vast? Depends what you have to say.
Faced with this expressionless expanse of paper, a coterie will not save you. You’re about to embark on a solo journey, and need more precise an idea of what it might be like. Let’s stick with journeys, now we’ve started, but what type? One with a terribly long way to go, but not by air, because there’s not enough detail to be seen from the windows. Some novels, nevertheless, take a flight-path, and the narrow view through scratched perspex is unengaged and distant, an indistinctness of flattened mountains and muddy brown rivers. The journey isn’t pedestrian, either, because it needs more pace than that. If you walk, it’ll take for ever, but some writers, too, have walked it. Sometimes with interesting results.
I used to think it most like a journey that was also a test of endurance. The Tour de France came to mind. France is a believably big country, if you’re on a bicycle, a world in itself of dips and rises, fast stretches with a following wind and long sapping flatlands. The Tour was undeniably bracing, occasionally convivial, and some of the others were on drugs. Understandably so, because the race was long and hard and you had to keep on keeping on, all while saving most of your soul for the inevitable suffering in the mountains.
This was a model that once closely matched my idea of the psychological processes of writing a novel. Sadly. A sporting metaphor appealed to me because of the energy required, and the sacrifices to be made in return for glory. There was merit simply in taking part, or so people said, but corrupted by newspapers and UEA, I must have believed that writing was a competition. The metaphor betrayed me. It was a race between men in which a flash of champions take the prizes and the rest are condemned to the pack, anonymous domestiques who fetch and carry and add to the spectacle without much troubling the podium.
Wrong. Novel-writing makes the Tour de France look easy, and sociable. There will be more numerous and daunting obstacles than the predictable geography of France, and much further to travel. The boundaries of France are simply not broad enough to cope with the ambition of a book, begun in good faith, which refuses to make the world smaller than it is.
Metaphor and simile, the first resort of frauds and prophets, are rhetorical attempts to make the world more manageable. They ravel consoling connections from an otherwise large and chaotic existence. Writing a novel is like riding the Tour de France. If so, that’s one less experience in this suddenly smaller world that needs to be understood on its own unique terms.
Fortunately, metaphor is an elemental magic: it also makes the world bigger. You have something in mind and the metaphor makes you think of something else, which makes you think of something else and so on, images to the power of infinity. Association leads to association until the world has once again insisted on its proper size and shape. Not small, but bigger than any one person can imagine. Hence the difficulty of writing a novel.
If literature were a race (old habits die hard), it would be more like the Vendee Globe, which pits solo sailors against each other in a circumnavigation of the planet. Each sailor is alone, and this is not a spectator sport that will be dominating Sky Sports 1 anytime soon. There are hundreds of miles between placings. Even though they’re engaged in the same basic activity, and heading in the same general direction, each boat is separated by widely differing conditions and latitudes, everyone in their own localised weather system with their own particular difficulties. The fastest are miles ahead, and you’ll never catch them unless their keels fall off. (If you like this metaphor, and you do insist on racing, take heart from several recent examples of keels falling clean off. Watch the debris float by. How delicious.)
But there again, it’s not a race against other people, nor even against the clock. Books are rarely better for being finished quicker. Ellen MaCarthur, my novelist of the year and a surprise omission from the Orange Prize shortlist, reminded every ocean-going writer of the significance, in her memorable phrase, of grunting up. There’s also nothing wrong with a good whinge from time to time. But although the journey will be as challenging, and as long over the water, not everyone is a Dame Ellen and can finish a book in 72 days, close to the conceivable minimum.
Most of us will embark with a less brittle determination to get there quickly, but equally determined to get round, and bring something back, and not to give up on the way. Why? As the magic realist Sir Francis Chichester once said, ‘because it intensifies life’.
There are certain unavoidable features of the journey whoever you are, whoever you know. It’s going to be a long haul, and most people need a fair wind to get started. It’s open to both men and women, and the trip has no favourites. You can start from anywhere, it doesn’t matter, but you’re more likely to make it if you’re properly prepared. It does help, for example, to have a competent and sympathetic shore crew. Ellen had her long-range weatherman and satellite navigator, her agent, editor, and a supportive Mum and Dad. She made detailed plans in advance, and considered a course in Creative Writing or English Literature as a basic Global Positioning Device. All this must have helped, and you can take maps galore – How to Write the Knox-Johnston Way – but they won’t make the trip for you. At some point you have to let go, and cast out alone into the silence.
Whatever its exact dimensions, the world is the same size wherever you start. How much you see and record of it is now up to you, but we all cover the same territory sooner or later, crossing and re-crossing in the wake of others, or in the memory of their wakes, re-living and hopefully re-inventing every previous attempt to encompass the world we live in. The journey is similar for everyone, and yet also never exactly the same. No two routes will be identical, no matter how many times the journey is attempted. Choose your own route, any route you like; more plausibly, any route you can. Include some stop-offs, go back on yourself, wander lost for years. Just wander.
Some days will be clement and not as hard as you thought. At other times, making headway will be more desperate and impossible than you ever imagined. There will be exhilarating typhoon-force surges, long days in the doldrums, and the unrelenting persistence of the Southern Ocean where progress is only made by defeating the fear that you may not make it. Be ready for unexpected obstacles, as well as entirely predictable hazards like the famous enemies of promise – freak storms, rudder malfunction, sudden whales in the hall. You will have to be courageous beyond dreaming and inspired by a vision of the finish, of closing the circle, of having seen and crossed the globe. You have seen it with your own eyes. You have got it all in.
There is a romantic element to the journey that will not fade, no matter how many marketing meetings and sales reports clutter the fanciful ocean. There are uncharted islands to be discovered, even now, and if the world were so small the journey would surely be simpler. You’d never wonder what you were doing here, or lose sight of land. You wouldn’t cherish the grand adventure, always worth the candle.
Not everyone is interested, of course. There’s the plain fact that to many if not most people round-the-world sailing doesn’t matter in the least. It’s a minority interest, but what it means to other people is not always the most urgent consideration. Gaze at the long horizon and revel in going solo, you and your sense of destination and your loyalty to your own standards. Believe in the value of the journey in itself, even if it remains, at heart, like poor magnificent Ellen’s, unnecessary and possibly irrelevant. But immensely worthwhile if you’re the one actually doing it.
So it’s not a race, but there’s still a finish line, the point at which you’ve been around the world and closed the circle. It’s invisible, and you could miss it. You could stop short, or go too far, yet there is, always, a correct, invisible, flawless place to stop.
‘It’s great that I can finally switch my brain off and relax in the company of others which I’ve really missed,’ said 28 year-old prize-winning novelist Ellen MacArthur. ‘I feel absolutely exhausted but I’m elated to be here. It has been an unbelievable journey.’
You’re back. You step outside and look around. Oh no. You haven’t moved from where you started. Around the world we go, alone in search of its wonders, and in real time when it comes to an end we’re still in Falmouth, or wherever else it was we started. This anti-climax might almost persuade you to accept the limiting smallness of the proverbial small world. Almost. Except with the creases at the corners of your eyes, and your 200 pages of navigated paper, you now know better.
In his final year at UEA, 1994/5, Malcolm Bradbury chaired the pre-Christmas seminars of the MA in Creative Writing. Over eight weeks, the students had one three-hour seminar a week. In total, then, a sum of twenty-four hours with Professor Bradbury.
From the first, he looked immensely tired. He’d seen all our types before, must have done, and as he checked us over I imagined him hoping that this year, after so many other years, no-one in a black polo neck or steel-rimmed glasses was going to be chasing him down corridors in the hunt for publishers’ numbers.
No luck, Malcolm. Of course he was chased down corridors, and was patient and helpful and charming, or expertly evasive, which possibly felt much the same. It didn’t take long to realise that his fatigued look wasn’t a result of disillusion. Above the bags the eyes were still sharp and eager. Even though all the talk that year was of retirement, the weariness came from hard and continuous work. He was writing another novel, a screen-play, a television series. He was chairing conferences and staying awake at all hours to share with Radio 4 listeners the working writer’s view on The Net Book Agreement, the Booker shortlist, or that year’s hot literary topic: novelists and teeth.
I can’t say I knew him well, having no particular talent for chasing down corridors. However, I still value greatly my twenty-four hours with Malcolm. He flattered every one of us by making us feel we weren’t like everyone else, that we were brand-new types he’d never seen. He was expert at making student writers feel like writers, and diffusing animosity on those prickly occasions when the work is mistaken for the person (‘I despise your lax punctuation’). He had a gift for creating neutral space, in which all kinds of opinion could survive. The entrenched, the unpleasant, the fashionable, these were less likely to thrive, but they were allowed to live.
It wasn’t teaching as a qualified teacher might recognise it, thankfully. Twenty-four hours with Malcolm was not twenty-four hours of Malcolm. In fact, in those twenty-four hours, I remember only one instance of direct instruction, involving a whiteboard and a marker. I think it worth recording.
Unusually, Malcolm stood up. The novel, he said, is a series of variations on two basic curves. At the whiteboard, entertaining himself, he expressed this as lines on a graph. The x axis is time, the y axis mood. The tragic story, Malcolm said, is often triumph until about two-thirds of the way through, and then drops tragically back to nothing, or beyond. The comic story first descends, in hilarious mishaps, then rises again, at least to where it started, perhaps beyond.
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It’s possible that I’ve embellished this in memory, to celebrate the unique sight of Professor Bradbury at the white-board. For Malcolm, or at least the Professor of Creative Writing who was trying to teach us something useful about the craft of the novel, it was in or against these plotted points that novels always form themselves. And it was exclusively within the form of the novel, he would imply, that all things can be expressed.
I call it, because of the shape he drew that day on the board, Malcolm’s Kite. It can help get novels off the ground.
Questions for Mo Hayder on the novel Tokyo by Liu Mei Cheng, David Gaston, Yudai Iwasaki, Kumiko Kondo, Yuko Miyawaka, Mizuki Moriyama, Kanae Nio, Junya Nomura, Miharu Suzuki, Keita Takekura, Katsuhito Tomita, Satoki Umezawa
Tokyo University 03/07/05
Is a Japanese translation of Tokyo planned? If so, would you prefer the UK title Tokyo, the US title The Devil of Nanking, or something completely different? When you were writing the novel, did the possibility of Japanese readers influence the writing?
If I had any doubts that the facts about Nanking have been repressed, those left me when my Japanese publisher, who has published my previous two books, refused to publish Tokyo. So the answer, sadly, is no.
I always preferred the title The Devil of Nanking. You might be disillusioned to know that often the title of the book is influenced by the art director: after two books publishers begin to ‘brand’ a writer – to give him/her a ‘look’ making the books readily recognisable in the market place. Part of my ‘look’ in Europe (not the US) depends upon short titles. Hence ‘Tokyo’. Sorry to expose to you the seamy workings of the industry (it’s something writers in general have a tacit pact never to mention). But the truth is that so many issues the readers believe are aesthetic choices are very often decisions-by-committee: influenced by marketing and publicity dynamics.
I tried to be aware of what Japanese readers might feel when reading the book – I tried as much as possible not to be too dogmatic about laying the blame at the feet of anyone. There is a scene in which a soldier refuses to shoot any more Chinese prisoners. His superiors attack him physically for this – and then, in a tiny moment, we see one of the senior officers is revolted at his own actions. My intention was to illuminate that the chain of blame was never ending – that everyone was being pressured from above. And sitting nominally at the top of that chain was a mild, small statured, possibly quite naive man, by the name of Hirohito.
(See below for more on my approach to guilt and atonement)
The use of Japanese words is very effective in the English version, especially to represent Grey’s urge to belong, and yet at the same time her displacement. This effect will be lost in a translation – is there any way it could be kept?
Yes – it’s a very good point. Foreign language words add texture to any piece of text and can be very effective in creating rhythm. One of the problems for a writer is knowing how not to overuse foreign language – I had lots of Japanese words I really wanted to use, simply for their feel and resonance and musical quality, but I had to discard them because I knew they’d drag down the narrative pace.
They say that reading a work in translation is like kissing a woman through a veil. I’ve never kissed a woman through a veil, but I think I understand the metaphor. One of my greatest sadnesses is that I don’t speak another language fluently enough to be able to compare texts in translation and the original. A translator’s job is a much underestimated one – they don’t simply convert words into a different language – they are dealing with many other things: nuance, levels of irony, use of poetry, alliteration, etc etc
But as I have pointed out in the previous question, Tokyo will not be published in Japan. So no translator will ever have to struggle with how to keep that contrapuntal effect the Japanese words lend the text.
Shi Chongming’s journal is always introduced by the kanji character that means ‘history’ (and also, possibly, Shi Chongming’s name). In the Author’s Note, you describe your extensive research into Nanking. Does this emphasis on history suggest you were committed to facing criticism about your portrait of the massacre?
To date, with the exception of my publishers, I’ve had no adverse comments on my portrayal of the massacre (actually this includes several Japanese readers in Australia who have contacted me about the book). I tried very hard to raise questions about guilt and denial and explore those themes, without necessarily providing answers. This is partly a function of my writing style – I don’t like to dictate the reader’s moral response to the events I portray. Maybe I’ve got too much faith in the reader’s ability to make the right judgments, because sometimes my work is interpreted as immoral, or at least amoral.
The massacre was a very difficult area to research – I don’t speak Chinese and my Japanese is pretty poor (especially after 16 years out of the country) so I needed help from a translator for the Chinese sections. The other problem was that most of the Japanese army records had been destroyed or confiscated during the American occupation.
The thriller genre often exaggerates for effect, and sensationalises the present. In Tokyo, for example, there is a generic distortion of the geography of the city and also a lack of sympathetic Japanese characters. Those described in detail – Fuyuki, The Nurse, Strawberry – are all physical grotesques. Is there any danger that your exotic account of contemporary Tokyo casts doubt on your treatment of history in the chapters on Nanking?
I think that’s a question only the individual reader can answer – since all interpretation of fiction is subjective. I’d argue that there are no sympathetic Japanese characters in Tokyo: Strawberry in particular is a sympathetic character, so is the Japanese soldier who refuses to shoot the Chinese prisoners. And there are equal numbers of unsympathetic characters from other parts of the world. In fact – you could say there are only 3 sympathetic characters in the entire book: Grey, Strawberry and Shi Chongming.
You are right however that Strawberry is a physical grotesque – and I think this stems from the very strong visual impression I have of young Japanese people. Going to Yoyogi park on a Sunday left an indelible impression on me of the chameleon possibilities of Japanese youth. I don’t think there is anywhere else in the world where people use themselves as canvasses to this extent. I’m told the only Japanese industry that hasn’t suffered in the recession is the hair dye industry! Is that true?
In a previous interview, you mention that none of your Japanese friends had heard of the ‘Rape of Nanking.’ With China demanding an apology for war-time atrocities, this is now very topical. ‘Ignorance is not the same as evil’ would seem to offer some comfort to contemporary Japan, but just knowing is not enough to resolve historical problems. Should young Japanese also feel guilty? What do you think we should do to improve the relationship with China, especially concerning historical issues?
I have just come back from a working tour of Germany. Among the cities I visited were Dresden and Köln, both of which were heavily bombed by the British. In Dresden on one night alone 35 – 135,000 people died in the firestorms that swept the city. The bombing was largely unnecessary and sometimes supposed to be ‘revenge’ for the bombing of the British city of Coventry. Being in Dresden kept bringing me back to the question I had in my mind when I wrote Tokyo – namely, what is an individual’s responsibility for the actions of his/her nation. What do I as a British citizen owe the inhabitants of Dresden, for example? What does a student at Todai in 2005 owe the citizens of Nanking 1937? What do I owe the Iraqis for an invasion I neither authorised nor approved of? The problem is there are so many ways of answering this question that you can only accept there are no answers. At the end it’s about who writes history – and on that subject I come back time and again to one small comment, from General LeMay who ordered the fire bombing raids on Tokyo. If the US had lost the war, he said, many of the American Generals and politicians would have been in the dock at war tribunals, tried for atrocities. So it goes, as Kurt Vonnegut would say.
You have addressed many taboos in Tokyo and your earlier novels. In view of the critical and commercial success of films such as ‘Life is Beautiful’ and ‘The Downfall’, would you be willing to write a similar novel about Nazi concentration camps and links to modern Germany? As a western writer, is it easier to tackle inhumanity from a safe cultural distance?
It’s a writer’s job to stick his/her nose into the taboos of any society. That is exactly where you learn the most – so I’ll probably always be hunting the weird and hidden. But with regard to using the Jewish holocaust as a subject: this was a question I was asked by several German journalists last week. I take your point about it being easier to tackle inhumanity from a distance – and it’s a good one because I think a lot of writers, including myself, find it much easier to tackle a lot of things at a distance (I found it easier to write about Tokyo when I’d left it for example). But this is not the reason I wouldn’t write about concentration camps. I feel that ways of treating the Jewish holocaust have been so thoroughly explored I have nothing to add to the voices. It is a very crowded forum. Part of the impetus for writing about the Pacific war was that it was such an unmined area and I specifically wanted people to know that there wasn’t just one holocaust in the 20th century, but several. It’s time we saw films/fictionalised accounts of the Armenian massacres, the Rwandan massacres, Stalin’s reign of terror, King Leopold etc.
The Nurse is the most frightening character in Tokyo, and not Fuyuki. Is this a problem for the novel? Also, the Nurse continues to roam Japanese society – does this suggest the possibility of a sequel?
Yes. I’ve been told that she is very frightening, which makes me suspect myself of pure evil genius, because I wrote her very quickly, right off the back of a moment’s inspiration (rare for me). I wanted Fuyuki to be believable, because he is at the core of the novel, and I thought that casting a comic book style shadow of violence across him would have been wrong. It was quite simple: he needed a henchman, and the Nurse was there.
I very much doubt there will be a sequel to Tokyo. I certainly have no plans at present. But never say never.
In some ways, the scene where Shujin is murdered didn’t seem brutal enough. She could have protected her stomach or suffered some embarrassment at being stripped half naked by unknown men. Does her undramatised capitulation undermine the realism of the scene, if realism was what you were aiming at here?
Generally speaking realism is exactly what I’m aiming for – the sort of realism you’d get in a cinema verité film, or something made by the Dogma film collective. In the section dealing with Shujin’s death I was narrating through two filters 1) It is narrated through first Shi Chongming’s voice and then Grey’s. 2) Most of the scene is depicted as film footage. Both of these are filters that impose a different slant on the scene and must, necessarily, have an effect on the realism of the scene. But, if you feel that the realism was undermined, then maybe it’s simply a flaw in the writing.
Parents’ love for their children is a key idea in the novel, and one that challenges the book’s darkness. You’ve spoken elsewhere about your difficult relationship with your parents, and the fact that you were pregnant when you visited Nanking. Then, from Nanking, came the scene of a baby being bayoneted from her pregnant mother. Is the writing a psychological escape valve?
You’ve put your finger on a very important point. Writing is a very important psychological escape valve. I used to suffer badly from clinical depression, but this largely disappeared when I began to write – so I have Japan to thank for this – she taught me how to accept that all humans have a dark side to contrast with their light side. It’s a concept we have problems with in the Christian west. Being published has validated the thoughts and ideas I used to believe made me dysfunctional on some level.
I have written before about parents and children and always from a very disadvantaged stand point – i.e. I wasn’t a parent myself. Now that I am a mother the world, both literary and concrete, has opened itself to me in an extraordinarily rich way.
Do you think you have any conspicuous or secret flaws as a writer? Is there a specific area you’d like to improve in your next novel? Do you see yourself writing anything besides thrillers?
The only point that I am consistently told is a flaw, and which I consistently refuse to change, is my descriptions of violence. On this point I am absolutely firm. Anyone who wants to read a book in which the driving force is an extremely violent act, must be prepared to accept descriptions of that violence. Anything else is dishonest.
However I am absolutely sure I’ve got other flaws too. The problem with these is I don’t know what they are so I can’t weed them out. Paradoxically the more you establish yourself in any career the more difficult it becomes to get honest and constructive criticism. I know several established writers who publish books they should be ashamed of. They get away with it because they are so established that no one will tell them their quality is suffering. My antidote to this is to read consumer reviews – on Amazon, or in Newsgroups for example. Or questions like yours. This is the most honest appraisal of one’s work you can hope to get. So the next time you share thoughts on a writer’s work on the internet, beware he or she might be looking over your shoulder.
With regards to the last part of your question, I write under a pseudonym because I would love to write children’s books one day – Secretly I want to be the next Roald Dahl.
We enjoyed reading about Grey’s shopping in Chapter 20. The ‘weirdo’ Grey tries to be sexy for her work as a hostess. What is your definition of ‘sexy’ and what do you think makes women sexy?
Wow! I’m a heterosexual female, so I don’t think I’m in a position to comment on what makes other women sexy, but I will say I’m always amazed at the immense variety of things people find erotic in a woman. If you doubt this read a book called Encyclopaedia of Unusual Sexual Practices by Brenda Love (but only if you’re feeling strong). So what is sexy? My guess is that the only common denominator in sexiness is confidence. A woman has to love sex and love her own body in order to be truly sexy.
Your description of Hongo is so life-like you must have visited Tokyo University. How do you feel about the book being studied in the University that features in the novel? And if you were to give a class here at Todai, what would you like to teach?
I went to Todai in 2003 and wandered the campus to get a feel for it. If I’d known about it when I lived in Japan in 1989 I’d have spent more time there, it’s the most welcome oasis imaginable in Tokyo. Of course I played God with the geography a bit, so I feel mildly nervous that the book is being studied there.
On the last part of the question, the truth is I would hate to teach a class at Todai. I have perpetual stage fright and work much better with the written word. So I’m going to wave a magic wand and say: I would be the student, not the teacher. I would sit for hours learning kanji and how the characters evolved. (Let me know if you can arrange it for me!)
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About Richard Beard
I'm a novelist and non-fiction writer, and recently took up the post as Director of the National Academy of Writing. As time goes by I'm gradually transferring the material from the old site (stories, articles, squibs) into the categories tabbed aboved. There's information on each of my books, with summaries and reviews, and now that I'm permanently back in the country I'm available for events and readings. Email me using Contact, below right. I'll get back to you.
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